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Then There Was You
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 03:07:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
SongLyrics
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My eighth post was an attempt to write something I could hear Meatloaf singing
I tried again here, one hundred and eighty two posts later. Thank you, Tanya.
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I have never felt this way before
Never held onto a dream ... quite like this
I never wanted oh, so much
To feel another’s touch
Or lose myself within their kiss ~
And I never lost my self control
Never surrendered everything I know
God, I thought somehow I knew
Everything that love could do
But I was so far from the truth ~
Because then there was you
Oh, then there was you
And you came from out of nowhere
Like a full moon through the clouds
Like a sunny summer day just when
The rain starts pourin’ down
With a voice that cut through silence
Though you never spoke at all
And the words you didn’t say
Were just enough to break resolve
And now everything I ever
Thought I knew about this game
Has crumbled to the ground
Nothing will ever be same
You gave me all your reasons
And left reasonable doubt
To think I thought I knew somehow
The way that love turns out
And I have never felt this way before
I never held onto a dream ... quite like this
I never wanted oh, so much
To feel another’s touch
Or lose myself within their kiss ~
And I never lost my self control
Never surrendered everything I know
God, I thought that I had seen
Everything that love could be
And I had all I’d ever need ~
Until you came to me
Then you came to me
And so now I know for certain
What the poets speak about
They say that when it comes to love
There isn’t any room for doubt
And you shouldn’t speak it lightly
For it’s more than just a word
And it truly means the most
When it is felt before it’s heard
And I have never felt this way before
Never opened all of my closed doors
I don’t know how this story goes
Or felt so nervously exposed
But now I finally know the truth
And it’s all because of you
All because of you
Because of you
You
I’ve never felt this way before
( never wanted someone more )
I’ve never lost my self control
( I can feel you taking hold )
I’ve never felt this way before
( never wanted someone more )
I’ve never lost my self control
( I can feel you taking hold )
I thought somehow I knew
Everything that love could do
And I thought that I had seen
Everything that love could be
And I have never felt this way before
I never held onto a dream ... quite like this
I never wanted oh, so much
To feel another’s touch
Or lose myself within their kiss ~
And I never lost my self control
Never surrendered everything I know
God, I thought somehow I knew
Everything that love could do
But I was so far from the truth ~
Because then there was you
Oh, then there was you
Then there was you
Then there was you
Then there was …
You ~
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2006-05-21 15:07:34] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Then There Was You
(User Rating: 1 ) by samwrue on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 06:18:01 PM AEST (User
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amazing, i wish i could write songs |
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Re: Then There Was You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 09:03:52 PM AEST (User
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Way to go Naz! Length kinda points to a live perfomance song. I idolized MeatLoaf! Gotta git the Real Player workin'!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Then There Was You
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 10:50:06 PM AEST (User
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nice job...i'd love to hear it to music.
wiz |
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Re: Then There Was You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 11:26:58 PM AEST (User
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*applauds madly*
holy heck snazzy!!! This is bloody brilliant!! I really want to hear this
sung! Good grief! You had better get a hold of Steinman and I mean
right QUICK!
This was astounding! I could even go so far as to say, this is
your best lyrical piece thus far. Brilliant, man.
~Breezy
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Re: Then There Was You
(User Rating: 1 ) by suesmuse1 on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 06:42:14 AM AEST (User
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I love it! Hope to hear it with music soon!
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Re: Then There Was You
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 03:56:39 AM AEST (User
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Your dUGHTER IS NOT ONLY SMART SHE'S VERY RIGHT.
sUPERCALLAFRADUALISTICEXPIALADOSHUS.
huggs,
emy
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Re: Then There Was You
(User Rating: 1 ) by GurlyTye on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 07:16:23 PM AEST (User
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You always amazing me with your ability to write |
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Re: Then There Was You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Willofree on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 11:36:46 AM AEST (User
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Naz,
Brovo! I loved the song, you certainly do sound like you were inspired. Music and poetry, quite a talent pool!
Great song
Will/Terry |
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Re: Then There Was You
(User Rating: 1 ) by CAUGHTinAdream on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 10:16:01 PM AEST (User
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omg this was seriously amazing! I could just picture myself singing along to this! Its definately something I can relate to! Well anyway you sure do have a talent for writing songs, keep it up! |
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