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Life never promised to be fair
Contributed by
yaknowrobbie
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Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 02:44:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The only thing promised in this life is death
Life never promised to be fair
I can see your in pain with every breath
No matter what I will always be there
How do you carry on?
How can you be so strong?
When a loss like yours
Seems so unjust and so wrong
I'm here for you to lean your weight
To catch you when you fall
I won't let you be comsumed by hate
When you need a superman just call
But when I place my feet in your shoes
It just seems to hard to chew
But as life promises death to me and you
I promise to see you again too
-In memory of someone whos just experienced a sad loss
-You know I'm there for you
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yaknowrobbie
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2006-05-21 14:44:41]
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Re: Life never promised to be fair
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 03:11:14 PM AEST
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| I think i like this poem cause I can relate to lose. Nice write |
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Re: Life never promised to be fair
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by EddieDean on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 04:10:10 PM AEST
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| Nice poem, I can relate for I too have sufftered loss. Good work. |
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Re: Life never promised to be fair
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by emystar on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 09:09:43 PM AEST
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Wow! So robbie wonna yaknow?
Keep on yaking 'cause this is one helashus mmmmmasterpeice!
U jus reach out-n-grabs your reader and captivates.
go ahead-npyak 'cause I'll be readin.
huggs, big smiles,
emy
Oh yeah, welcome. |
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