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MY FIRST DATE.
Contributed by
FRANCO
on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 12:52:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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beneath the tender moon night
I held my vibrant heart in the form
of a fresh red rose, as its fragrance flow
waited for my love; on my first nervous date.
Bothered not for those passing time as I counted
a billion stars, longing eagerly for my quixotic cute
fairy to show, to glow and to blow
her warm breath of freshness in my life.
Swiftly stood the time and every thing that moved
but for my speeding heart; as my radiance of fortune shown at
far - gliding over the lush green lawn graceful as a swan,
shamed moon buried her pale face behind her cloudy veil.
we gazed at each other for eternity, spoke not a word
but for the gushing blood in our vein that carried tickling
massages of pleasuring pain from the heart to the brain until all
memories to drain; love, love, love, that was our gain.
That date remains fresh till-date, a decade and half gone by yet
she is my dame, when recalled the gush of blood in my vein is the same.
(FRANCO)
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FRANCO
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2006-05-21 12:52:45]
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Re: MY FIRST DATE.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 02:24:59 PM AEST
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Mighty fine recollection, Excellent selection of words describing the beauty and emotion of that first date, ya ol' shy guy. I sent ya a pm 'bout it.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: MY FIRST DATE.
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 08:27:02 PM AEST
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"Swiftly stood the time and every thing that moved
but for my speeding heart; as my radiance of fortune shown at
far - gliding over the lush green lawn graceful as a swan,
shamed moon buried her pale face behind her cloudy veil."
Ahh My friend, you have done her justice.... That verse was my favourite. I can just picture her gliding towards you...
Beautiful write..
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Re: MY FIRST DATE.
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by The_Young_Poet on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 09:00:17 PM AEST
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| Bravo!! Very Very good. Nice piece |
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Re: MY FIRST DATE.
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by Lo2681 on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 02:27:23 AM AEST
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Nice job....so cute.
~Lo |
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Re: MY FIRST DATE.
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by rapnificent on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 10:59:38 AM AEST
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| romantic |
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