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Daddy
Contributed by
karoody
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Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
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Sitting in my hole, looking for an out
But I ran from everything-
Always seemed easier to hide
Now I have too many demons in the way
Scariest one being my own soul-
Tarnished by the cruelty of the world.
Too tired to fight and face myself
No where to run this time
Been camping in this hole for too long
Can't remember how to get out
Though I remember how I got here
And going back the way I came is a fate I can't imagine....
I know you come to see me
But its too dark to see your face
Too dark to find strength in your smile.
If I could just feel your warmth
Maybe I'd find my way
But you left my world and I can't come to yours
'Cause I want something to show for this life
When I can finally knock on your door.
Copyright ©
karoody
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2003-02-06 12:00:00]
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Re: Daddy
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 04:06:27 PM AEST
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| awww i hope you get to see him, welcome tp ypdc too:) well done poem too.. |
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Re: Daddy
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 04:24:26 PM AEST
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| welcome to the site, great poem, keep moving forward things should work out |
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Re: Daddy
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 06:43:34 PM AEST
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Welcome! Great poem here very touching!
Keep em coming! Christina |
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Re: Daddy
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 05:23:57 PM AEST
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Welocme to ypdc, Kara..this is so touching... Best of luck to you...
Jenni |
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Re: Daddy
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by fancyface4898 on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 04:57:44 PM AEST
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| nicely put. too many times things are taken for granted and it is good to want something to show for your life |
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Re: Daddy
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 03:38:29 AM AEST
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| very touching.. venkat |
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Re: Daddy
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 02:25:46 PM AEST
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Hey, Kara I liked this poem. I can see the yearning in this short but beautiful poem. I liked it a lot. Keep on writing! Ttys hopefully
Your friend,
Joel |
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Re: Daddy
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by kolbrun on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 05:33:48 AM AEST
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this is such a great poem. you are a very talent poet. keep it going..
yours Kolbrún |
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