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Paradise Long Forgotten
Contributed by
munk
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Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 05:30:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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In some long forgotten corner of this world,
There lies a beach where no food has tread,
A dreamland where no sound is heard,
A place where no soul has been,
A place that is remote
Isolated
Untainted.
And when the sun is but a fiery mirage in the distance,
When the waves and the calls of unseen birds
Celebrate the night's arrival
Paradise is born
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munk
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2006-05-21 05:30:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Paradise Long Forgotten
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 05:44:55 AM AEST (User
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Hey munk,
pretty impressive for a school assignment. If I had written something like this at school, I would have been pretty chuffed with myself.
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