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Lonelyness
Contributed by
tier
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Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Your spirit stays with me to this day i see your shadow on the walls in our empty bedroom...i see ur boxers sitting on the dresser waiting to worn...so i put them on then follows the tank top you always wore....your scent still soaked into the fabric i sit and remember your touch and kiss the way your hand always found its place....
I walk down the empty hallway to see you bags gone now realizing that your not comeing back the pain makes my chest hurt...there on my couch i see the teddy bear i got from u the first Valentines day we had together......still sitting there even though it has been over four years since your feet touched this wood floor.......one day ill get over loosing you but why try you were my one and only ill never move on no man could take your place
Then just then there is a knock on my front door...I walk slowly to it wearing ur shirt and ur shorts and holding your bear crying from the greif.....I open it and there is the delivery man with a dozen roses i think he must be wrong....he reads the poem in the card for me for i am in tears to think that you sent them...but sure enough ther eit was ur signature on the bottom...no date of when you will return did you give only the vow that your heart was still mine.....
Five days later the very day you walked away........i sit and cry alone......in the very room that you said good bye in.....never realizing that goodbye was the word but ill return for you one day is the one you ment.....then i look up eyes full of tears adn ther eu stand in the doorway to our now full bedroom god has blessed me with your love you say......and you lean down and kiss my cheek......I love you and always will and ill never leave you........
Then i wake up to see that bear staring at me and then the phone rings........
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Re: Lonelyness
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by kangarose on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 03:41:42 PM AEST
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| great write although sad.....enjoyed it immensely |
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Re: Lonelyness
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 01:01:28 AM AEST
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| intense words, tier...good job. |
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Re: Lonelyness
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 04:53:59 PM AEST
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| Tier.Been there (in the other sex)but had to get over it. You caught the feeling so well i wanted to stop reading but couldnt |
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