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Break
Contributed by
EddieDean
on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 09:08:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Tonight I break it,
I break my bond to
This mortal Coil.
My life is Hell,
My death will be Peace.
Will you cry for me?
Anyone? No one?
:sigh:
It's done now,
Now I depart.
My life is over now,
Please move on.
Don not cry,
It's too late.
Do not grieve,
I'm in a better place.
Tonight was my night,
My night to break,
To break my life.
Copyright ©
EddieDean
... [
2006-05-20 21:08:43]
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Re: Break
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 09:14:33 PM AEST
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wow, i've felt like this many of times when I used to cut myself. Great poem. Thank you for posting it.
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Re: Break
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by PoeticHybrid on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 09:38:39 PM AEST
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| Nice job. I like it. |
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Re: Break
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by Mystik on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 02:09:48 AM AEST
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| Suicide is a permanente solution to a temporary problem. |
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