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Mysterious Humorous Antics
Contributed by
Lilly-Quill
on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 06:45:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I awakened to the dreary foreboding and whistling of the wind;
As sighing intervals portrayed “don’t go to work at Denny’s tonight
‘Twill surely be their humour antics that will kill thee out right;
New Zealand’s Harold will cover it all and those here will exclaim:
“Ah yes, I remember her quite well~, ah~, what was her name…?”
Maybe it’s enough to stay in bed, indeed, and introspectively wonder:
“What if it should be…?”
I knew of Caron with her charming bold wit~,
And Margaret, too, who sneaks up on you~,
And of course, Miss Franks~ whose always there~,
But what evidence could be proved~ to anyone, anywhere?
They all hide~, until in the break room they sit.
I thought I’d die~, yesterday, and still their antidotes wouldn’t quite!
Yet I survived, but drollery stricken scheme might lay in-store tonight?!
This is not the normal Denny’s, as anyone from America would say~.
Why shouldn’t I listen ‘creatively‘ to the wind; and stay at home today?
Copyright ©
Lilly-Quill
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2006-05-20 18:45:54]
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Re: Mysterious Humorous Antics
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 08:18:34 PM AEST
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| "the answer, my friend, is blowing in the wind" LOL Enjoyed yer poem. |
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Re: Mysterious Humorous Antics
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 08:21:07 PM AEST
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This put a smile on my face tonight Lil. : ) thanks for that.
A wonderfully cute piece!! lol I relate to that last line, omg
SO muchly! It's perfect!
~Breezy |
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Re: Mysterious Humorous Antics
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by faiton on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 06:38:08 AM AEST
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Reminds me of TS Eliot's "Prufrock" for the 21st century.
Like it. |
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Re: Mysterious Humorous Antics
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by samwrue on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 06:22:08 PM AEST
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| haha very nice very nice |
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Re: Mysterious Humorous Antics
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 09:10:44 PM AEST
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Milly~
A most enjoyable write from such a witty and clever poetess. I suggest you invest in a pair of ear muffs that way u don't hear the wind, you don't hear the alarm clock u only hear ur quiet little thoughts, lol.
You can always put a smile on my face my dear friend. Thanks so much.
love n hugs from ur fan/friend,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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