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IT'S NOT YOU:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 06:10:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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"He can never love you the way i do,"
the sound of his word some how ring true.
which one will she choose,
o how i wish it"s not you.
i am her man and i stand on that truth.
i truely love this lady, deeper than a wish.
yes he's clean, sharp and rich.
but he never said the words, i love you Hitch.
so i believe am the one she will choose
boy was i wrong when she broke the news.
"i love ERIC, that's who i choose."
my heart just melt ,hearing the bad news.
excepting her answer, i turn and walk away.
learning a good lesson just how love play.
always remember it's not about you.
its about the person, true love choose.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2006-05-20 18:10:26]
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Re: IT'S NOT YOU:
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by emystar on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 09:04:27 PM AEST
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Well this is a sad subject but5 excellent write my friend. You still got us here at our global family.
luv ya, hang tuff,
emy |
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Re: IT'S NOT YOU:
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 11:17:44 PM AEST
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Good write, Richard...well done..tho it must have been difficult to write....
I think this is my favourite of yours..
Hugs
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