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dream alive
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
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half awake in a dreamy souled reverie
flowerlike aesthetically deeper into depth
spellbound by the stunning drawing lure
now half asleep stargazing into trance,
falling falling from the clouds enchanted
profundity of thoughts ever consuming you
transported well now into the dream..
fantasy moonstruck incomparable reality,
the dream is real you are ecstatic there
radiant loveliness within' the rapt moment
preoccupation wraps unconsciousness
elsewhere is nothing, now alluringly sublime,
oblivious delight, tastefully tasteful n' brilliant
dreamfulness and sighs, your taken up within'
the soul of your dreams meets you there
dream alive the moments shared in dreaminess,
drowning in the beauty of your soulmate
charming and wonderful, ever so near
awaken and find the faraway dreamery
bemusement because he had the same dream..
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Re: dream alive
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 11:29:44 AM AEST
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| Dream on LadyFawn,and let the poetry come forth.Always nice to read your masterpieces.Take care and keep writing. |
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Re: dream alive
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 11:33:34 AM AEST
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Wow very well done with this one!
Keep on Dreaming,& live them out!
Great peice! Christina |
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Re: dream alive
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by wolfflow on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 04:06:43 PM AEST
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| beautifully written poem, you described the feeling of dreaming so perfectly, i am in awe of this one, wonderful poem |
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Re: dream alive
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 09:38:07 PM AEST
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I enjoy reading your poems. Very nicely written...
¤ Hanna ¤ |
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Re: dream alive
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 07:09:24 PM AEST
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very beautiful , i enjoyed this one very much
Shari |
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Re: dream alive
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by karoody on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 01:05:47 AM AEST
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| Well, maybe I'll read this at bed time so I'll have sweet dreams. hahaha...Keep 'em coming, Nessa. Always enjoy reading. |
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Re: dream alive
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 01:24:19 AM AEST
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| roflmao! |
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Re: dream alive
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 01:30:17 AM AEST
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| honestly kara your reading so many of my poems.....i opened the page on this one and my ghost one, at the same time; thought you had this comment on That one... lol.. thank you for your comment and sweet dreams always, hugs nessa *promises to pay better attention* :P |
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Re: dream alive
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by venkat on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 01:30:50 AM AEST
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| Oh!..great .. what a fine imagery and superb expression. This is dazzlingly beautiful. hey, my dear friend..your poetic heart like new phoenix unfolded its wings in this poem..congrats....I guess in the near future you are going to surprise me with your poetic talent.. Keep them coming on dear friend..venkat |
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Re: dream alive
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 09:30:48 PM AEST
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| This is a very beautifully written poem, Nessa. Very imaginative. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: dream alive
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 11:09:04 AM AEST
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| i can see that you don't have word problems like i do...lol. cos this one is awesome... |
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Re: dream alive
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by xxmonstahxx on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 01:53:27 AM AEST
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| your poems lift my heart and make true love possible in my mind |
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