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Pure Friendships
Contributed by
blueheart
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Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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When the world around me crumbles,
When hot tears glide down my face,
When I try to walk but stumble,
When I feel I'm losing my pace,
When sadness and pain envelopes me,
When I watch as turmoil takes place,
When I'm tied down and can't fly free,
When life seems like one big maze,
It is then you will find your way,
To my lonely heart so frail,
And with one touch erase the pain away,
And guide me back to my trail.
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blueheart
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2003-02-06 09:00:00]
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Re: Pure Friendships
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 10:42:25 AM AEST
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| lovely........ |
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Re: Pure Friendships
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 11:39:06 AM AEST
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| I have to agree with LadyFawn it just kind of touches your heart.Keep them coming. |
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Re: Pure Friendships
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 03:09:09 PM AEST
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| Very nicely written ... |
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Re: Pure Friendships
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 02:07:35 AM AEST
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oh this describes me so much except for the last two lines this was so beautiful very well written and heart warming. Keep on writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Pure Friendships
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by Ronald on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 09:42:52 AM AEST
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| This poem is indeed another good poem of yours! Hey, I love this poem! |
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Re: Pure Friendships
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by Arwen on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 11:38:25 AM AEST
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awwww this is such a beautiful poem...ends with so much hope. Thanx for sharing it with me. :))
* Happiness, always *
Arwen |
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Re: Pure Friendships
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by Qohinoor on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 09:33:36 AM AEST
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Hehehe....got a boyfriend?
'cos it sounds like you just got one... |
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Re: Pure Friendships
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:39:06 PM AEST
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| This was such a nice poem. I can agree with every word of it. Good job. *S* Cynthia |
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