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lonesome
Contributed by
crazy
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Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 06:59:46 PM in AEST
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lonesome
all day long i sit and talk with people
invisible i do feel
alone with no one surrounding
my heart is pounding with sensations
to being lonesome
i help as it is asked of me
sense of need or want frome others
feed the ever growing hunger
of acceptance
i get off the bus and in the woods again
alone with no one
not even a friend
i live in my own personal solitary of hell
lonesome with my self to try and find
a place where i can run and hide
thow knowing it not possible i sit strong
all by my lonesome
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Re: lonesome
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 03:00:26 AM AEST
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Awesome writing. Know the feeling.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: lonesome
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by romance_pyro on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 03:00:31 PM AEST
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| It is hard to find that one person who accepts you but being lonesome isnt so bad because it drives the desire to be better than everyone else...just dont become cocky...er :D good write Jess keep it up |
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