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Starving Soul
Contributed by
blueheart
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Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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All alone,
So afraid,
Silence thickens,
Heart is dead.
Happiness fading,
Moving out free,
Sadness flowing,
Drowning me.
People around,
Mean nothing,
Everything grieving,
Soul is starving.
Undesired for,
Totally unwanted,
No care no more,
Can't find comfort.
When will it change?
When things get better ?
Or are still the same?
One day will I find
A person who cares,
Will it be too late?
Will I still be there?
Copyright ©
blueheart
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2003-02-06 08:30:00]
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Re: Starving Soul
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by blain on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 09:23:33 AM AEST
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This so applies to me..
i just broke up with my boyfriend on tuesday.. |
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Re: Starving Soul
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 09:27:06 AM AEST
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| awwwww.......... |
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Re: Starving Soul
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by ed on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 10:42:23 AM AEST
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| Be Strong you will get through this bout. Depression is a horrible thing that a lot of people do not understand. It comes on gradually and you can feel it coming but it cant be stopped. You need someone to talk to and to care about you other than those that already do as you do not want to upset them and in a way you feel ashamed. This is the feeling I get when I read this poem. Keep your chin up, you know it'll be o.k |
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Re: Starving Soul
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 11:42:21 AM AEST
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| What love dosn't bring forth from the heart.Hang in there you will find the right one,just don't give up ok? |
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Re: Starving Soul
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by roisin on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 11:47:06 PM AEST
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excellent write! best luck that love will find you again...
rosie |
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Re: Starving Soul
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 02:10:42 AM AEST
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Oh wow I can so relate to this. Wow I dont know what to say.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Starving Soul
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by Ronald on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 09:44:48 AM AEST
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Sad poem...
By the way, the style of this poem is quite unique.
Yeah... you just showed Malaysia boleh! |
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Re: Starving Soul
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by cryingonmyporch on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 11:46:41 PM AEST
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I liked it. Very nice, your right when your absolutely depressed.
Always
Amy |
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Re: Starving Soul
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by xlguesswho14xx on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 11:23:26 AM AEST
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| wow..i can really relate...very nice |
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Re: Starving Soul
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by Qohinoor on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 01:19:56 AM AEST
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| Learn to care for others. When you care for others, you care for yourself. |
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Re: Starving Soul
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 07:44:48 AM AEST
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I hear ya, well said. Been there many times.
Good work.
Hang tuff,
emy |
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Re: Starving Soul
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 09:42:45 PM AEST
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| Awww, this is so sad. I have been there many times Hanna. Give yourself a chance for your heart to heal. Things will get better. *S* Cynthia |
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