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LOVEBIRDS
Contributed by
FRANCO
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Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 12:04:30 PM in AEST
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Flapping my little wing up in the sky gliding merrily
free and peerless. Gazing the mountain blue yet pretty and far,
reflection in the dreamy dew arrested the mighty hills my day shall
come to scale beyond the pale blue pinnacles.
Lonely though I was, yet rest assured; for, she was there for me
somewhere beyond those pale blue pinnacles.
The Initiator loved the game he played kept us in the mystic dark
– instigating our move.
Tender-dawn guided me to my lass from the land
beyond the hazy blue pinnacles, eyes spoke the word,
and love bloomed, as we glided merrily for a day or two.
Chattering joyful minas and the melodious black cuckoo were delight.
Puff; broke the bobble - came slithering down the rumbles.
Was it a mighty pale pinnacle or is it dunes
of the mesmerizing shadowy dusts of desert -
that flew away as the high wind blew?
Fooled us by its illusion; so dim we are,
failed to revise the rules of the game.
Am I a player, or am I just a bystander
Watch me being played?
The Initiator loved the game he instigated -
kept us in the mystic dark as we played.
(FRANCO)
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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Re: LOVEBIRDS
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by ek_da_poet on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 02:59:47 PM AEST
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very goood, liked how you used your words made very good sense
keep it up
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Re: LOVEBIRDS
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 06:23:29 PM AEST
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Oh Franco!
It is a lovely poem, but it holds a secret, a mystery that I was not able to solve.
You witnessed something with your friend that seemed too elusive.
But it's just this mystery beyond the two love birds that is so intriguing.
Perhaps more reflection will make me find out.
Blessings!
Elizabeth
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Re: LOVEBIRDS
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 09:06:45 PM AEST
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Very intriguing write, my friend....
You sure have a way with words...
(Tell Mario to look out for me tomorrow)
Hugs from your rival.....
Jenni |
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Re: LOVEBIRDS
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 09:56:27 PM AEST
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Sorry Frank...gave it three hard reads...just can't get hold of it buddy...sorry,
Den
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Re: LOVEBIRDS
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 06:04:33 PM AEST
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Precious and wonderful write, let love not be a game. I can see the character up there flying and flapping its wings, lonely, sad, looking at his own shadow high up above that mountain, peering down to take a second look at loves mystery.. wondering if what was given freely was really given in truth... wonderful write... a good grasping heart felt write... wonderment, mystery of the most delicate and greatest emotion in the complete world that can be enjoyed as well as felt in several ways, and how it can grow. It is the greatest emotion that we use to compare the rest of our emotions with.. it is not however an emotion to play with or... to be used .... and blamed when we shut ourselves out and away from it, we must not escape love... be open and honest to it.. and be extremely careful when it is spoken of... not something to fool around with, it is too powerful, it will teach you... if you shut it out... much pain and anger and other emotions will come to fight your soul. A masterpiece.. I am giving you every star there is from my heart.. that was given to me... from love...
I so enjoyed this write... to know love is to be love, what we are created out of.. Love = GOD
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Re: LOVEBIRDS
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by needledancing on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 11:39:18 PM AEST
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| Oh so once again you enter the love field...with your paint brush and your talent and you paint a picture that changes with all who look upon it....so that could be quite brilliant...Thanks |
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