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I Rise.......
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 11:46:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I rise through this hole in the ground, in my hands the heavens will come crashing down,
You attempt to fight, but your power is weak, the more you strike me, the more the future looks bleak,
The flames of hell emerge from my grasp, burning the wings of these angels at last,
The sky is blue but shall turn red; the rivers fill with the innocents that bled,
Your followers pray in hopes they are saved,
The ground shakes as the churches crumble and break,
Satan has been reborn into a child, crucified by God and yet she smiles,
666 is the mark of the beast, 666 brings the world to its knees,
The only way I am to be stopped, is if God himself came down and fought,
You hold the key to heaven's gate; I'm not concerned fore I will tear it down with my own hate,
The war between good and evil, victory for you is unconceivable,
The sky shall open in blood, anger and vengeance will overcome love,
The ocean shall become fire, as the ancient Gods of Rome expire,
Surrender now and refuse to fight, the world has been covered by a blanket of night.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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Re: I Rise.......
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 12:52:04 PM AEST
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although I am not a fan of evil I find this poem intralling...and the flow very good
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Re: I Rise.......
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 12:52:18 PM AEST
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| Absolutely beautiful, yet dark but captures the readers full attention.Well done |
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Re: I Rise.......
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 12:53:15 PM AEST
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P.S. I am a big fan of your writing
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Re: I Rise.......
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by Archie on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 04:02:26 PM AEST
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| Your words are well put together and "Though we are bent toward our own destruction love (God) holds us together because he fights for us" In other words things aren't always as they seem. This is a skillful write. |
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Re: I Rise.......
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by Remi on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 05:24:42 PM AEST
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| wonderful the words just roll of your tongue it dark and very passion it just a beauitful write |
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