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Do you see...
Contributed by
Kimberlynn
on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 11:08:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When you look
at me
When you see
me
I seem
black and white
I'm just
a one page book
A priss
A book worm
A little girl
But...
Are you even
really looking?
Are you really
seeing?
Open me
The book
as you have labeled
me
I'm not
just one
page
I am
more
than that
Copyright ©
Kimberlynn
... [
2006-05-19 11:08:33]
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Re: Do you see...
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by ek_da_poet on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 11:46:50 AM AEST
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| good write comparing a person as a page i liked it |
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Re: Do you see...
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by Craigums on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 01:18:19 PM AEST
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Just to say, i found your poem really moving. I enjoyed it from the start.
Craig |
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Re: Do you see...
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by Twig on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 01:33:22 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed your poem. I think there are many who can relate. |
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Re: Do you see...
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by Somnium on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 11:11:27 AM AEST
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Don't we all feel that! Great write really interestingly prosaic.
Ben
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Re: Do you see...
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by Karlee14 on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 05:17:46 PM AEST
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Deeply motivating. Many judge people and labelling them as different without looking at their own lives to see that they're not so perfect either.
Love,
Karlee |
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