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remember
Contributed by
co_cane13
on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 12:54:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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life is a sin
so lets us begin
an end with a new beginning
lets cherish those
who were always good souls
and honor those who came before us
so lets start new
and do what ever you do
just remember those who are watching
so be true to yourself
no matter the wealth
and stand next to those who would always stay faithful
always remember your friends
and do what ever you can
because life without friends has no meaning
so i will leave you with this
always remember to hug and to kiss
those who are dear to you in your life
Copyright ©
co_cane13
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2006-05-19 00:54:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by sadaddy on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 01:28:53 AM AEST (User
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co_cane13 I really thought this was a wonderful write. The last two lines say it all. Be good and take care
sadaddy
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Re: remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 02:44:06 AM AEST (User
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such a nice poem.
yes always hugs and kiss the ones you love.
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Re: remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lo2681 on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 02:56:55 AM AEST (User
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Very true words. Good wite here I liked it:)
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Re: remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by Davinah on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 04:33:56 AM AEST (User
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Very nice poem. Very positive emotions.
"be true to yourself" I TOTALLY agree with that because as far as I am concerned, the only thing in this life that is truly yours is your own soul. So you better take good care of it.
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Re: remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 03:27:17 PM AEST (User
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a great topic to write on and to remind us all of. nicely done.
Michelle |
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