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Come Back
Contributed by
Jen54
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Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 11:58:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Its comming back
The darkness in my mind
Showing me the images
Of what I left behind
Now the light is fading
As I lose the path I'm on
And now I sit and wonder
If it is all that bad
Copyright ©
Jen54
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2006-05-18 23:58:39]
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Re: Come Back
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 12:35:11 AM AEST
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Jen54 Nice write, I guess we always find out that the grass isn't always greener on the other side. Be good and Take care
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Re: Come Back
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by Lo2681 on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 02:08:57 AM AEST
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Nice write...yes it can be scarey knowing that dark feelings are close behind you. Try to keep your head up. Everything has an end and I know you will pull through:)
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Re: Come Back
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 05:17:07 AM AEST
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| well done a nice little piece |
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Re: Come Back
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by Tiffyo4 on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 11:46:02 AM AEST
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very nice poem jen very nice
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Re: Come Back
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 08:57:06 PM AEST
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| Nices Write |
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