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sweetest goodbye
Contributed by
evolon
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Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 07:48:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sweetest Goodbye
I gave my self to you complete with my baggage!
You must love me
Im true and honest and all yours
To keep to love to hold
At times when it seems love’s not enuff
Im man enuff to swallow pride and be wrong
Not just to by pass time but when times are ruff
You are my glow my smile my walk my hearts rhythm
You are what I wake up for the reason I breath
My love for you can not be measured a timeless treasure
I walk threw hell to bring you
Id die ten time over b4 id go 1 day without you
You complete me in a way I never imagined possible
As the days turn months then years
My love grows strong and it seems your slowly disappears
I beg u, what of me to fix this
You replied you never felt as I so for happiness you tried!
I died the world is spinning hold me as I cried
I cant breath, I can no longer feel the air u gave in me!
I felt although I needed to know what was so wrong
So tell me , I give you my all how can u leave me alone
She said “when we met I told you I just wanted to date to see what happens”
I said “I thought we went threw that and this love is what happened”
She revealed “ you’ve been cheated , mistreated and it haunts my mind so I must go”
I appealed “ don’t go , it will be hard but we can get threw that”
She stopped me “there’s more”
I fell to my knee wiped my eyes enuff to see the closing door
How could she do this to me, why Im begging god
Did I hurt some1 in my past and its back to serve me
Is it that what I yearned for she never seen
Im living in so much pain without you writing letters making calls texting all
Im looking at the emptiness in your eyes threw a picture on the wall
Im questioning my self do I live do I die so much pain
I come across a song … it explains so clear.
Rushing to the store I need this cd , some1 knows my pain Im not alone its not just me,
Driving in the car you and only you consume my brain
In the store , “I need maroon 5, songs about Jane!”
To my surprise a cd coddling my pain
I hurt so bad for you and want you back
Then track #1 speak to u for me with out seeing u
Track #2 tells me I cant take it I listen in my heart but I had to much
Then track #3 tells me what to do to get in your heart it may be pain but Im there!
Track #4 settles me to knowing I would take the pain to have u with me
Track #5 has me wondering how did I get so tangled in some1 who doesn’t care
Track #6 how could I not remember when I met you the start of all my pains
Im stunned track #7 comes on and I cry all for u
Just when I thought it was a love song I realized track #8 is love lost!
And as honest as I ask u to be I wonder should I let u keep that secret track#9
And now track #10 makes me wonder do u wonder?
But I think no I know Im strong enuff to come back to u Im not coming home track #11
Track 12 I wish you’d listen to it because it only let u know where I am at now even though you left me a broken image of a man time is all I need and like a lost puppy hurt by the world the first time, imma go away lick my wounds and you will see the loyalty I gave to u, to the deserving woman …. Your age 31 Im only 28 who’s the youngest? I will live threw this pain to love again even more than b4 and if I fall along the way please know, the first cut is the deepest… I wish I could wish u well and batter but I cant right now when time passes and no more tears of what you’ve lost, because I will be the 1 you wished you never hurt get the disc maroon 5 songs about jane … close your eyes and listen and feel my pain and just at the end when you can bring your thoughts together realize it about so much more , smile…it’s about you Heather! Good bye!
EVOLON 4U
May 18, 06
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Re: sweetest goodbye
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by EddieDean on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 08:31:19 PM AEST
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A powerful write, deep and full of emotion. Life will work out, keep your head high.
Keep writing.
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