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I Am
Contributed by
MrPerfect
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Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 07:04:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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I Am Broken Yet ReBuilding
I Wonder Is there someone out there for me?
I Hear Encouragment from friends and family
I See Others Support Me
I want to not feel/be alone
I Am Broken Yet ReBuilding
I Pretend To Be Cocky
I Feel Different
I Touch the lives of others
I worry about my unknown
I Cry for the pain of others
I Am Broken Yet ReBuilding
I Understand God has a plan for all of us
I say Believe In him and everything will work out
I dream of a better tomorrow
I try to bring people up
I hope to become a youth Pastor
I Am Broken Yet ReBuilding.
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MrPerfect
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Re: I Am
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 07:07:02 PM AEST
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| Very honest write. I liked this. |
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Re: I Am
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 07:44:02 PM AEST
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yes, there is always someone there for you.
youth pastor? really? cool.
rebuilding...
- Beth - |
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Re: I Am
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 08:46:33 AM AEST
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You are not broken if you have the spirital resources to touch other lives beneficially.
You are whealthy, rich, - not broken.
Congratulatios.
Blessings for the ministry.!
Elizabeth |
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Re: I Am
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by ButchHoward on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 12:14:35 PM AEST
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I love the optimism in this piece. We all become broken, but if our faith is strong enough, we will always be rebuilding. Excellent write!
It sounds like you have what it takes to be a good shepherd for those who may be broken and for those who need rebuilding.
Butch |
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Re: I Am
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by -xhaleyx- on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 11:54:41 PM AEST
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i read this one in art class. And its still as good as the first time i read it. Keep it up. You're great poet.
-x haleyfer x- |
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