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Solituded
Contributed by
Sinfullilmissmuppet
on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 06:57:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sitting rejected
Solidly alone
Feelings that
Should cut
Down to the bone
Needing pressure lifted
No end in sight
The nails once
So pretty
Dig into naked skin
The teeth gnaw
At trembling fingers
The indents loud
And hidden
She hates
The way she knows
Exactly how to score
Her skin god given
She knows.
Copyright ©
Sinfullilmissmuppet
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2006-05-18 18:57:44]
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Re: Solituded
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kevin on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 08:05:28 PM AEST
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Wow. Very depressing and very sad, but a great write nonetheless. Hang in their hun, you'd be surprised at how fast things in life can turn around. Just remember, smile just a little bit more and hate a whole lot less, it makes life that much better.
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Re: Solituded
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 12:39:16 AM AEST
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very sad indeed.
hope your ok
take care |
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Re: Solituded
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by drtylilsecret on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 12:56:07 PM AEST
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whoa, dark, know the feeling and absolutely loved it.
~natalya
PS: thanx for the comment |
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