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Deep Witihin
Contributed by
Craigums
on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 02:45:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I’m around you,
Its like there’s nobody else there,
Just us, in our,
Own little world.
Even though we are
Just friends,
It seems like something else
Exists, deep inside ourselves,
Set that something free,
Let it run wild,
Let it run to me, and
Find its way home,
Just where you belong.
Copyright ©
Craigums
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2006-05-18 14:45:33] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Deep Witihin
(User Rating: 1 ) by Somnium on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 02:50:18 PM AEST (User
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I know just how you feel
For a first go this is really good
it's really good anyway!
Very powerful imagery
Loved it
Ben
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