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Melody of the flute
Contributed by
ek_da_poet
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Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 01:39:21 PM in AEST
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Tu, tu, tar a, tu
The melody of the flute
Adding a nightly beat
Woot woot by the burrowing owl
A shortcut path through murky woods
Singing alone, while skipping
Twigs all around all over as I step
Crack Crack, I heard another sound
With my mentality on sound
Placing these noises that was found
One after another
Beat by beat
It goes something like this
Tu, tu, ta ra, tu, woot woot, crack
Listening is how I got from beginning to end
The scary nighttime darkness has been distracted
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Re: Melody of the flute
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 01:42:00 PM AEST
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| I really liked this and .. well the noises of the forest scare me more so I tend to tune them out..lol |
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Re: Melody of the flute
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by Lo2681 on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 11:55:45 PM AEST
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This is a very unique piece...thats what I like about it. It's disciptive and flows nicely....great write:)
~Lo |
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Re: Melody of the flute
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by Gentlemanpoet on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 08:00:03 AM AEST
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| Very good, Thanks for posting |
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Re: Melody of the flute
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by The_Young_Poet on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 12:32:07 PM AEST
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| Well written and descriptive. Nice Piece. |
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