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I still....
Contributed by
depressedsoul
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Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 11:50:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I still miss you...
But not like I did before
The intense aching I felt,
Isnt there anymore
I still whisper you name
Not as often as I used to
Now it may be once,
Before the day is through
I still hear your voice,
Replaying in my mind
But its fading now,
Soon, silence I will find
I still long for you...
And wonder how you are,
But my feelings have changed,
And they dont go as far
I still love you...
But its just not as strong,
Because Im letting you go right at this moment
So we can move on with our lives.
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Re: I still....
(User Rating: 1 ) by ever1der on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 12:53:06 PM AEST (User
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your poetry shows how hard it is to let go.. I can feel the intensity of the pain..good job. |
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Re: I still....
(User Rating: 1 ) by spider on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 01:53:58 PM AEST (User
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me likies :).
its sad, but happy too :) tis good to not miss people so much anymore. |
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Re: I still....
(User Rating: 1 ) by EddieDean on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 08:38:13 PM AEST (User
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It is hard to let that special person in your life go, and you illustrate that in your poem.
-Eddie Dean |
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Re: I still....
(User Rating: 1 ) by purplestary on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 01:45:51 AM AEST (User
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yes...it is a bit sad..but still happy....the realization that life must go on...with or without that person...nice job with this. i liked it. |
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Re: I still....
(User Rating: 1 ) by abs_squeeky on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 03:49:29 PM AEST (User
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hey dude i remember reading this one. well any ways it is good |
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