|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Hollow Rememberance
Contributed by
Lo2681
on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 03:08:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
|
In the mirror,
Today saw the face,
Wanted to run from,
Thought I’d misplaced.
Terrible old feelings,
Dark and alone,
Rolling sleeves up,
Cut to the bone.
Nothing felt right,
Nothing felt wrong,
Nothing felt good enough,
Didn’t feel at all.
Whipping the steam,
Off of the mirror,
The image I saw,
No longer there.
Staring back at the person,
I recognize,
Now being that person,
Not having to hide.
A sigh of relief,
Never going back,
Don’t want to remember,
Feeling like that.
Copyright ©
Lo2681
... [
2006-05-18 03:08:31]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Hollow Rememberance
(User Rating: 1 )
by Adelle on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 03:39:46 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| so little words but very descriptive. very, very good. |
|
|
Re: Hollow Rememberance
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 04:06:53 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very well written. My miracle is zooloft.
Great work.
huggs,
emy |
|
|
Re: Hollow Rememberance
(User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 06:14:09 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This. . . is very wonderful. Conveying feelings I am so very familiar with. I see the images so vividly -bravo on this write!
Laurie |
|
|
Re: Hollow Rememberance
(User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 06:24:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
your strength shines through in this write...nicely done!!
stay strong,
wiz |
|
|
Re: Hollow Rememberance
(User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 01:49:11 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| hard thing to beat; depression. I love the wording you used to wipe the steam off of the mirror, nice visual. |
|
|
Re: Hollow Rememberance
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 04:17:14 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Recalling "the fight" in reflection, wiping the mirror, recognition and strength to change the reflection. Tight, good use of thought lines an ally to brevity. Enjoyed.
wabl
KenMoore
cowboy |
|
|
Re: Hollow Rememberance
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 06:23:13 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Lo~
I'm still struggling with my depression. Some days are alot better than others.
You have done a superb job with this write. I'm so happy for u Lo~ it takes alot of guts and courage to be where u are today. Well done. May ur days always be bright and blessed.
big warm huggers,
~*suzie Q*~ |
|
|
Re: Hollow Rememberance
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 11:22:32 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
So glad you beat it!!!
This poem is very powerful and I love the way you expressed your emotions so well with hope and inspiration.
Thank you,
Tim
:-) |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
