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The Shine.
Contributed by
UrbanFlower
on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 10:21:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Shine,
Memories,
Dirty brown fear turns the rusty key.
Shine,
Honesty,
Patience is never worth the misery.
Shine,
Obscurity,
You’re being all that people want to be.
Life is never what we want it to be.
Imperfection, Shadows, Hate: -
A trial of error and misconception.
Life’s Shadows fall to the floor,
Only to find that the one you knew is not there anymore.
Shattered image on the wall....
Tell me who's the fairest of them all?
Copyright ©
UrbanFlower
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2006-05-17 22:21:33]
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Re: The Shine.
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 11:24:33 PM AEST
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I had my doubts at first..
but after mid-way.. I was blinded-
awesome~
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Re: The Shine.
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 12:33:36 AM AEST
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| I agree with Man on High, the pace gets more exciting halfway into the poem. Interesting questions you've raised here: "Tell me who's the fairest of them all?" Brilliant last line. |
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