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Over
Contributed by
samwrue
on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 09:18:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Done, finished.
It’s finally complete.
No more to do.
It is over between me and you.
The feeling is gone,
There in nothing left.
Either right or wrong,
Doesn’t matter.
It is just empty,
Blank, shattered.
Copyright ©
samwrue
... [
2006-05-17 21:18:21] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Over
(User Rating: 1 ) by Drapes on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 04:13:09 PM AEST (User
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Nice. I like powerful endings and yours doesn't seem to really have a powerful one but that's just my opinion. Other than that, nice write!
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