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Flawless

Contributed by frmpoison2static on Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 08:32:03 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Its quite funny how life nestles around aimlessly.
It is so peculiar how it shifts and sways to a mute beat.
The beams of light hide from time to time.
I am appeased to know that the summer air is here.
So flawless the sun is at perfect alignment every second.

I called you out, your demeanor gave you away.
I couldnt possibly ignore the laughter you make.
We are careless, this is just a trivial experiment.
Just to see how much you care.
This is just a game, you are the objective in chase.
Meet me at my place, I will be in reverie as I watch.

I will persuade you, you are my trick.
The correct words at precise timing will get her undressed.
A sincere grin will make me commit this sin.
The beams of light slip on and off your face.
Everything is in place, I will remain quiet and subdued in suspense.

Excuse me for this situation, uncomfortable and screwed.
California summer plays games, and I am addicted to them.
Im a creep but only inside of my own head.
Its too late I am already inside, there is no escape.
I am stuck inside locked down and helpless.
But you are so flawless the way you conduct your every move.
So I will remain silent as it happens.

Copyright © frmpoison2static ... [ 2006-05-17 20:32:03]
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Re: Flawless (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 10:41:26 AM AEST
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i love all the word choices you made! this is a fabulous poem!

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