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Morbid Divinity
Contributed by
poetic_tragedy
on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 03:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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She stands by the doorway
Seeming to glow
With a morbid divinity
Seeming to show
Her eyes are dark blue
Her hair raven black
When you see her your breath quickens
Like a knife in your back
A breeze sweeps by
Seeming to come from her eyes
It chills you to the bone
And you realize you're alone
She walks by
Seeming to glide
On the ground
She flashes a smile
And no matter how hard you try
Your hers
Morbid divinity
You are the victim
Morbid divinity
Your eyesight grows dim
Morbid divinity
Causes you sin
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Re: Morbid Divinity
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by Icequeen on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 06:07:19 AM AEST
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| Ohhhh, love it! It's great, but (hope you don't mind) you have a few grammatical errors. I’d love to read your story that goes with it ;- )……? |
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Re: Morbid Divinity
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 10:34:26 AM AEST
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| lovely and wonderfully dark........... |
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Re: Morbid Divinity
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by TheSpiritx on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 04:21:12 AM AEST
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| This poem would make excellent lyrics if rearranged slightly to allow for a refrain and whatnot. |
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Re: Morbid Divinity
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 12:23:11 PM AEST
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| this is amazing... |
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