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Sadisticly yours
Contributed by
Sinfullilmissmuppet
on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 06:46:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The pain is always matched with love
the tears matched with concern
the yells matched with whispers
I am too confused to rebel
while i lay on bed bound
his large hands stroke my hair
lovingly, softly, precious
he whispers obedience
he pulls my hair around his knuckles
he pulls it till my scalp burns
the hairs are starting to come loose
he yells obedience
DO WHAT YOU WANT WITH ME
my hair
tears flow
no more
he approaches my body
shivering in fear
lays his warm hands over me
and grips
the warmth meets the cold
i move towards his touch
smiling
he pinches the exposed flesh
I'LL BE A GOOD GIRL
my skin
pinched raw
no more
No more? his eyes flicker rage
the metal is cold
his hands are colder
the knife moves down
Where the knife goes
i cannot see
this blindfold of love
provides all the consent he needs
NOT THERE NOT THERE
my legs
in between
no more
in and out and round and blood
having fun yet? having fun?
if i make a noise i'll be dead
if i stay alive all i have is him
my sobs render his heart
and enrage him further
he kisses them away
while gripping my neck
I'M SORRY, IT'S MY FAULT
please go
my husband
no more
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Re: Sadisticly yours
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by Jeremy_B on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 06:56:34 PM AEST
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| Wow. The words fit very well with the theme of this piece, they wernt forced or anything. I love the imagery. Good job. |
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Re: Sadisticly yours
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 09:14:41 PM AEST
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| wow this was dark and filled with visuals.. I don't usually care for dark poetry but this got me in its grip. |
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Re: Sadisticly yours
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by Davinah on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 02:03:22 AM AEST
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Very well done. You can really feel the tension of the moment.
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