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The Winter Haven Rose
Contributed by
Lilly-Quill
on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 06:29:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Down by the river flow of the old shady oak tree
God sends His pure Love and lovingly sings to me
Consider My beauty surrounding mountain and streams
Know love that's abounding in the Word of My dreams
The Snow Fairy rose is delicious, amidst green leaves
A brilliant Pink Iceberg rose of winter won’t cleave
As the snow-capped mountain tops, this love is pure
Comparative to those acts of righteous saint's allure
Such a rose, a sweet fragrant nectar attracting pests
Although life’s never a fairytale enchantment, at best
As trials beset, then time to rest in the Rose of Sharon
Let hummingbirds naturally rest and avoid the barren
Copyright ©
Lilly-Quill
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2006-05-17 18:29:14]
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Re: The Winter Haven Rose
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 10:01:19 PM AEST
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that truly was a beautiful write...very nice. i love your descriptions in this write!
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Re: The Winter Haven Rose
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 11:14:38 PM AEST
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Milly~
WoW, u go girl. U have such a flare with a pen. I can only dream of writing the way u do. An extraordinary poetess whose pen flows ever so fluently with such poetic masterpieces. It's been a while and I sure have missed ur awesome work. I have alot of catching up to do. Keep up the great work Milly. Always a pleasure visiting ur pages.
warm smiles and huge hugs from ur fan/friend,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: The Winter Haven Rose
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by emystar on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 02:29:54 AM AEST
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Very beautifull write.
For a minete before the poem I thought u meant the city Winter Haven, Florida.
Good work.
huggs,
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Re: The Winter Haven Rose
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by Gentlemanpoet on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 11:52:00 AM AEST
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| Very Good, Thanks for posting |
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