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Bride
Contributed by
Sinfullilmissmuppet
on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 05:57:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Holding the finger in her hand
she slides the ring on
for all to see the love so great
yet tears depressed slide down her face
The ring slides on easy
the perfect fit
this beautiful girl
found her grown up destiny
Her boy was strong
he was quick
the knife moved fast
the hate moved faster
Do you really know who you loved?
Do you really know who you hated?
or the intentions people strive to hide
from those innocent eyes
she lay on the floor
a puddle of red tears
weeping from her stricken body
warming the cold reality
wedding dress stained
hopes crushed
life leaving
still heavily in love
he is still busy
the cuts still come
she is still dying
no reprieve will come
the honeymoon over
before it began
and till death do them part
is taken literally again
Holding her finger ...no longer on her hand
she slides the ring on ...over the mutilation
for all to see the love so great...parting is such sweet sorrow
yet tears depressed slide down her face...while her eyes glaze over
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Re: Bride
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by spider on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 09:45:11 AM AEST
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| wow, i know its annoying when that's all comments say but i really dontknow what else to say... |
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Re: Bride
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by shasay on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 01:06:31 PM AEST
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| gruesome iloveit |
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