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In Dreams
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 03:10:19 PM in AEST
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Sleep takes over my restless mind,
And once again in dreams , I find,
A different time, a different place,
And once again, I see your face,
Your smile so welcoming ,makes me glow,
And a tingle through my body does flow,
You wrap your arms around me tight,
No loneliness I feel tonight,
I kiss your lips and touch your face,
My lonely heart beat starts to race,
Love and passion, burns like fire,
As we give in to our desire,
Our hands and lips they explore,
Till our tired bodies, can take no more,
We lie together, in our lovers bliss,
And say goodnight with one last kiss,
When I awake in the light of dawn,
I look around , but you are gone,
Of you, I can find no trace,
The salty tears wash down my face,
For in dreams,my love you were mine,
Another place , Another time,
Yet you brighten up my life,
I hope we meet again tonight
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jerseysue
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Re: In Dreams
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by samwrue on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 04:08:37 PM AEST
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| that is awesome, u r very creative and i guess know what u want haha |
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Re: In Dreams
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by ludders on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 04:34:23 PM AEST
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| this poem is astonishing at first, from the title I thought it would be a slightly immature poem, It was proved however that you should never judge a book by its cover as upon having read it I was stunned. You have completely captured my heart in this poem and I wish I could ever paint a picture as vividly and subtly as you have here, please make more! |
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Re: In Dreams
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 05:18:38 AM AEST
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| well written and well done :-) |
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Re: In Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 07:05:50 PM AEST
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| Aw! I wish he were real too! |
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Re: In Dreams
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by lillyjane on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 11:03:48 AM AEST
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| Beautiful Sue, as always xxxx(Jasmin) |
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Re: In Dreams
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by Bruce on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 07:59:24 AM AEST
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| just lovely, wish it were me |
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Re: In Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 11:19:45 AM AEST
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This title has the name of a favourite song of mine by Roy Orbison.All poets are dreamers,may yours come true Sue.Well written,
Den |
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Re: In Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 10:27:50 AM AEST
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Dreams are given to us to make come true. It's up t' you, little British buddy, t' take it from here! Fantastic write. More in my pm.
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Re: In Dreams
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 12:34:18 AM AEST
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"For in dreams,my love you were mine,
Another place , Another time,
Yet you brighten up my life,
I hope we meet again tonight"
Believe in the dream, Sue....It may come true some day....
Hugs
Jenni |
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