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SONS OF THE SAME WOMB.
Contributed by
FRANCO
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Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 11:23:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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They call me - heaven on earth,
gorgeous by birth – my fine carves
of mountain blue, cascading graceful
water that chuckles - send ripples of rapture.
Nesting little bird’s heavenly choir,
her wards innocent impish game so sheer,
playing children over my bosom valley;
but who blemished me into a tomb gully
Like a nightmare came the partition; spat
stains of blood on my tender wedding wear
of tranquility, turning its auspicious red into
bloody red, and slicing me in two for your wily desire.
Once so prosperous vim and vigor turned into
a purposeless garden of tombs of my children lay
deceased, booming times turned shattered and scattered
to billion pieces by bombing sons of my own womb.
My long anguish and pain shall depart to reinstate my lost
beauty and glory for I love and trust my children of my own womb.
(FRANCO)
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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2006-05-17 11:23:01]
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Re: SONS OF THE SAME WOMB.
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 09:41:54 PM AEST
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Very intreiging write.
huggs,
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Re: SONS OF THE SAME WOMB.
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 10:30:45 PM AEST
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A very fascinating write..Can't say that I understand it 100%...but I enjoyed it.
Welcome back, my friend. I look forward to hearing of your adventure.
Hugs
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Re: SONS OF THE SAME WOMB.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 11:26:46 PM AEST
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Very vivid and natural a refreshing presentaion nice writting.
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Re: SONS OF THE SAME WOMB.
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by FRANCO on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 10:30:44 AM AEST
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Dear friends I would like to tell you all that here in this poem I have tried to put forth my personal feeling of experience for the north Indian state called Kashmir.
FRANCO. |
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