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Independant Love
Contributed by
Lo2681
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Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 01:18:17 AM in AEST
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She was ok,
From the outside,
Standing strong and on her own.
She knew that things would go her way,
If only she remains alone.
It seemed as though she awoke one day,
And knew she could get by,
That no matter how many men scorned her,
She had no more tears to cry.
So she opened up her suitcase,
And packed away her life,
She knew the travel would complete her soul,
More than being someone’s wife.
And down the road she went,
Learning to love only herself,
She knew it was the right thing,
Because with this love she needed no one’s help.
And one day within her travel,
This woman met a man,
And even though instinct warned her,
She reluctantly took his hand.
She didn’t feel a need to love him,
Or fear the cards that might be dealt,
She was a woman that was in love,
Because now she loved herself.
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Re: Independant Love
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 01:44:47 AM AEST
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Very good write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Independant Love
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by Sasha on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 01:55:17 AM AEST
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| Cute write, i quite agree, it does make a lot of sense to get that way sometimes! But then, who can resist cupid's reality, thats something else, isnt it?!! |
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Re: Independant Love
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 02:11:21 AM AEST
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| Yes being let down can make you bitter, also in my case when my husband died, I was bitter that I was left on my own. Selfishness plays a part, and independance seems the right way. Well my reality now is , I need company but not a relationship. Your words are very good, and also quite true, I enjoyed reading this poem, strikes a chord really. Thank you. Sue x |
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Re: Independant Love
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 02:36:22 AM AEST
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Lo, one must be able to love thyself before they can love another. This holds true in any relationship. Well, written. Be good and take care.
sadaddy |
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Re: Independant Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 02:38:03 AM AEST
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This is truly an inspiring and lovely poem about confidence, sharing, and love.
A very enjoyable read.
Thank you for sharing,
Tim
:-)
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Re: Independant Love
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 05:39:54 AM AEST
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that was great! i love the last stanza!
wiz |
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Re: Independant Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 03:50:54 PM AEST
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| true love takes two, because true love is selfless... it makes itself nothing to give everything. |
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Re: Independant Love
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 06:42:21 PM AEST
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Lo~
An absolutely awesome write u have penned so well. One must love ones self before they can love another. Bravo, I thoroughly enjoyed this write. Keep up the great work.
warm huggers,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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