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Freedom
Contributed by
Alineko
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Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 12:24:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The breeze like silk
Cooled my skin
The salty smell
Cleansed my soul from within
The rippling waves
Showed me the way
The call of the birds
Beckoned me to play
And between the sky
And the sand where I lay
I tasted the freedom
Of a warm summers day
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Alineko
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2006-05-17 00:24:11]
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Re: Freedom
(User Rating: 1 )
by MLCstar on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 02:25:33 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed this poem. It is so refreshing and sweet. the imagery is wonderful and well thought out. Marvelous! |
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Re: Freedom
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 11:04:40 AM AEST
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| short but powerful, filled with visions I could see and smell and taste. good job! |
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