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Life Will Go On
Contributed by
daprdan
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Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 12:11:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When we were young our lives were new,
Our shared romance and dreams they grew,
Till that fateful day did come,
And finally the song was sung,
But, Life Went On
It hurt and tore deep down inside,
The tempest of that terrible ride,
Yet slowly diligently I rose above,
For life must rise as did my love,
And, Life Went On
I'd lived and loved and hoped and cried,
To mend my soul but no reply,
To quench a fire and dream I'd held,
Of love and life that didn't meld,
Yet Still, Life Went On
Life's monotony did well,
Pain and feelings they were quelled,
Through it all I was not forsaken,
Another's hand for me was taken,
And Too, Life Went On
I saw a life a form of rebirth,
We brought 5 souls unto this Earth,
They are my pride and their mothers,
But now I find there is another,
Oh Yes, Life Went On
It's not over this life I lead,
There's so much left it's only seed,
My life could grow and yours can too,
Say yes to me we've much to do
And As Always, Life Will Go On.
Copyright ©
daprdan
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2006-05-17 00:11:20]
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Re: Life Will Go On
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 12:14:57 AM AEST
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the unshakable fact is :
life, as time.. goes on no matter what.
great write.. with a beautiful and subtle flow-
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Re: Life Will Go On
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by Lo2681 on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 01:28:38 AM AEST
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Very beautiful piece. I like it very much. I think the same thing that no matter what you have to say "Life Goes On". Read Chain Reaction...one of my pieces... it is very similar to this. I like your style. I look forward to reading the rest of your work here:)
~Lo
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