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I Died A Death
Contributed by
Sweet_Silence
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Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:46:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I died a death but stayed alive
In phantom's likeness I survive
Alive, yet dead, I walk alone
In rooms with walls as cold as stone
I lived a life and dreamed a dream
And loved the life you lived with me
Then in the whisper of a breath
You left, and then I died a death
Though dead I live, I cannot part
From love that lives within my heart
Within my sorrow I must strive
To keep my hope and faith alive
For all the love that I would give
I surely would prefer to live
To be content, not to survive
But feel my spirit come alive
You slowly took your final breath
'Twas me, my dear, who died a death
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Sweet_Silence
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2006-05-16 22:46:59]
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Re: I Died A Death
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by GurLG0nEWr0ng on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 11:08:02 PM AEST
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Such a GREAT poem. good job!
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Re: I Died A Death
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 11:10:31 PM AEST
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How incredibly heart-tugging. Completely deep in thought
and sentiment. There is a message in here among the
sadness. Forth stanza. Wise words.
Excellent post.
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Re: I Died A Death
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by 2bpositive on
Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 10:10:11 AM AEST
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| Excellent climax. I agree. When you have all that love to give, you can never die a permanent death. |
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