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Let Me Be Free

Contributed by blaze68 on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:34:23 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I am trying to find who I am, someone I lost long ago.
I am sinking deeper into the darkness far down below
I can see the light but it gets farther everyday
Something pulls me down deeper if I try to get way.

I am giving into the darkness; it’s consuming who I am
The deep is swallowing me, it doesn’t give a damn.
The grasp is so tight, it’s strangling me more
If I try to get free, it grabs on tighter than before.

The only way I can get free, is to free my soul
To free it from my body, let my body fall into the hole.
Let it be free; let my body become one with the dark.
It’s feeding off me; I’ve lost all my spark.

Once my soul is free, the darkness will die.
My soul must be free; this creature is eating me alive.
I must release my soul so that I can free
I will live through others so that they will see.

Take care of my soul, know that I loved you
Live through my soul, and I will take care of you
Don’t let the darkness consume you as it did me.
Don’t drown in the deep, you can be free.

I will watch over you, it’s you I will protect.
I can be free now. I don’t want you to forget.
Remember me as I was, not who I became,
Remember me as a person, not just a name.

Don’t cry for me dear one, for I am now alive
Living through you, I’m seeing through your eyes.
I know it is hard losing a mother’s love
But I am free now, flying with the wings of a dove.

Copyright Â© blaze68 ... [ 2006-05-16 22:34:23]
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Re: Let Me Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 02:51:34 PM AEST
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thanks for the comment.

believe it or not...i can relate to depression....and this is a beautiful poem...i have admiration for poets who can rhyme...

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