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Bitter Feelings
Contributed by
luckedout
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Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 09:56:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Let me tell you about girls of my life
I tell you I like you, can we go out?
An instant regret after recieving their reply
Why should I try? I ask myself why.
Next ones smart funny and nice
She asks me out with a note in class
With confidence restored I feel hope inside
So I call the number from the message inside.
Whos this?
Its Me, I reply
Oh, its you why did you call me tonight?
I got your note and would like to see you sometime
Didnt you know it was a joke the whole time?
Yes, I said with a tear in my eye
Then hung up the phone all pride left through that line?
After a while I attempt another try
Would you like to go out with me for italian or pie?
No chance with me is the harsh reply
Thats just the beginning of my pain inside
Now they just lack straight answers
Leaving it all up in the sky
Thats zero girlfriends Ive had in this life
Yet you ask me why?
I look at you blankly; because I asked you last night
You gave no reply so it sits in the sky
Now tell me why they dont reply, answer no and make up lies
Why dont you like me how I am?
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luckedout
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2006-05-16 21:56:43]
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Re: Bitter Feelings
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:00:15 PM AEST
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i feel (and have felt, literally) your pain...don't give up...you'll get it!!
practice makes perfect!
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Re: Bitter Feelings
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 11:31:52 PM AEST
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Luckedout, well sir I am sorry that girls are so curl at times. But, one day you will find the right one that really cares about you as much as you do about her. Keep your head up and give it time. Be good and take care.
Please read "When we First Met" it may give you better understanding.
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Re: Bitter Feelings
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by Lo2681 on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 04:07:26 AM AEST
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Well I am sorry that this keeps happening to you. But honestly there is a girl out there that has never been asked out I am sure. So keep your head up and try again. Every person finds a match sooner or later. Just isn't your time yet. Dont look so hard. It'll happen:)
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