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Shunned
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 09:46:51 PM in AEST
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( having become accustomed to their banter, I notice when the voices are still )
They are quiet now
No new tunes
To filter through
The lazy afternoon
Sun
Fallen silent now
Missing words
That go unheard
Muted, much like songbirds
Done
Sleeping peaceful now
No new dreams
Or muffled screams
Demands or ponderings
None
I feel empty now
Without voice
Though not by choice
There is no inner noise
Shunned
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Nazmythian
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Re: Shunned
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 09:51:43 PM AEST
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very nicely done...i love the composition and rhyme scheme.
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Re: Shunned
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 09:54:30 PM AEST
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Wow. If this is you SHUNNED . . . holy heck snaz!
Writers block . . bah! You don't know the meaning of those
words mister word master. Even when you are "silenced",
you speak volumes!!
Wonderful piece here snazzy. And completely relatable. Only,
when MY voice goes . . . it REALLY goes. lol
~Breezy |
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Re: Shunned
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:06:11 PM AEST
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Amazing....writer's block can sometimes serve as the greatest muse of all, as your words clearly show...looking forward to reading what more amazing poems you will produce when those voices come back.
~Ave |
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Re: Shunned
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by Sagefairy on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:32:49 PM AEST
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Ah well Naz. Turn the radio up and do the moon dance or something. :) One of your shorter works, but still seriously good.
And...
A lot of people seem to be MIA these days. Here's to hoping they return. all the best to you
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Re: Shunned
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 08:09:21 AM AEST
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Well good sir, I wish for the voices to start up again for you, yet it seems that you were not quite so empty as you say!
Me thinks there was a whisper or two unoticed still going on! |
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Re: Shunned
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 11:10:09 AM AEST
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ahhhhhh how well I know the feeling. My muse is silent also..
this is a greaat write of yours..I think your muse is whispering in your ear. Listen harder (smiles) |
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Re: Shunned
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 05:26:50 PM AEST
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This has been fun exploring your writes and runnin' all over the place! Maybe that's it. Writer's block might be takin' ya all over the planet 'n' universe to find the next lines to another great write. This is one of 'em.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Shunned
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 11:27:30 AM AEST
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Naz,
Very well done for a writers block. I can really relate, as I have struggled with writers block. I discovered, as you demonstrate here, that when blocked, you write about being blocked.
Excellant write, perhaps no longer blocked....if you ever were?
Well done ms friend
Will/Terry |
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