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Leaving
Contributed by
kali
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Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 06:52:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I look in his eyes,
Then I realize,
He's looking right past me,
But how could this be?
All of these years,
All of my tears,
He told me he loved me,
And now he's just leaving me,
I loved him so much,
He was my very first crush.
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kali
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2006-05-16 18:52:49]
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Re: Leaving
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kevin on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:24:27 PM AEST
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Very short, but so much meaning to it. Poems that are generally 10 lines or less don't have much about them, but yours expresses so much feeling and so much sadness.... Excellent job
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Re: Leaving
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by Gentlemanpoet on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 07:16:02 AM AEST
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| Sad but a good write. I wish for thee love. |
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