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We Went to the College Fair to Get Out of Class
Contributed by
BBNeely8
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Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 06:07:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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"We Went to The College Fair to Get Out of Class"
by Brandon Andre
As time goes by, I sit and reminisce
And let the days die thin.
The future stares me in the face
I've but not a clue where to begin.
My younger days are dieing
It's time to step inside what life withholds.
My fate is etched in stone
My life plays out, the rocks unfold.
Adolescence is confusion;
A guide is all I need to make it through.
A fallen sentry by the side
Make me translucent to the old; the new.
Take my hand just one last time
Until I walk my rightful path.
A course of fate that needs not knowing
Until I meet with nature's wrath.
Who is he who gives and takes
And will he set the angels free?
Or are we here on sudden chance;
Lost without a destiny.
Pondering is life itself;
To wonder is the gift.
I look up to the stars at night
And wonder where my soul shall drift.
To coming of the inevitable
Is the fear of every tired youth.
But my friend, its inescapable
So take what's yours, and search for truth.
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BBNeely8
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Re: We Went to the College Fair to Get Out of Class
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by palebluesun on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 09:50:58 PM AEST
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| oh,Iove this.The rhymes are not too forced..which is rare...but if you forego the rhyming all together,you could probably let loose a whole lot more expression! I sense you have a gift for prose which is far more powerful than rhyming.Keep it up!The title begs so much more from the poem! |
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Re: We Went to the College Fair to Get Out of Class
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd March 2008 @ 01:02:41 PM AEST
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| Whyen I saw the title, I was prepared to read a humourous poem, But this was very deep and insightful. Good job but maybe change the title :) |
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