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You Be My Girl and I'll Be Your Man
Contributed by
Mangos
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Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 04:31:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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-only time will tell-
A humbling experience
Awe shocking
Draw dropping
Epiphany of time
An ashtray
Twenty five cents
A quarter of a mile
Down a road than never ends
Face flat
On your stomach
Roll over your back
Legs twisted
With your arms attached
The new position
Opened up
Filled with error
Sealed with wax
A nuisance
Busy to be bothered
Hurried from a bath
Sponging off my wealth
One good pillow
In a bed of stone
Tension
As the muscle prods the bone
Disappoint me
Three sixty-five
Days stolen
Honey from the queens hive
Figure it out
Keep me informed
Up to speed
In the loop
No need
To stay close or warm
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Mangos
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2006-05-16 16:31:02]
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Re: You Be My Girl and I'll Be Your Man
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 05:35:03 PM AEST
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| ummmmm...I read this but didn't understand it..sorry. |
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Re: You Be My Girl and I'll Be Your Man
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 08:04:33 PM AEST
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I made use of L1 in the final stanza.. and would say
that these few words are meant to wrap up some failed relationship-
with every little nuance endowed..as only you can.
I think it's deep, profound and very heartfelt-
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