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The Ravine

Contributed by lil_noel09 on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 09:34:19 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

There is a ravine
Between you and I.
It grow and grows
As time goes by.

At the bottom lies despair.
Towards the top, doubts and fears.
If you were to fall inside
Could you swim the river of tears?

"Take a look at your side.
Is life really fun and carefree?
Or is there something missing?
Perhaps forgiveness is your defeciency?"

I reach out my hand
Give one final plea
But you just smile
And turn to your fake jamboree.

Suddenly, you stop
Invite me to the masquarade
But I must decline.
I won't be the renegade.

I watch you walk away
Tears burning my face.
This is only one battle lost
In my toughest case.

Copyright © lil_noel09 ... [ 2006-05-16 09:34:19]
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Re: The Ravine (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 09:42:21 PM AEST
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True friendship goes through thick and thin. Give ur friend some time. Let their heart heal. When they are ready then they'll come back.
I'm so sorry and I hope things work out for u and ur friend.
A sad and heartfelt write. The best of wishes to u.
warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~

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