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Crumbling of Life
Contributed by
Heretic
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Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 08:18:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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My life falls apart where I stand.
My whole world crumbles.
All I can do is stand and stare.
I wish I could take action to prevent it,
But it would be like stopping time.
It is impossible.
I hate myself for being idle,
But idle is disconnected,
And disconnected leads to death,
And death is more than welcome.
I shall embrace it when it comes.
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Heretic
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2006-05-16 08:18:11]
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Re: Crumbling of Life
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by anotherface on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:32:50 AM AEST
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| i like the second verse alot. do you know why you are depressed? Pm me if you like, id be interested to talk because i've felt that too and i've recently (i hope) overcome it. |
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Re: Crumbling of Life
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by Lo2681 on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 01:36:15 AM AEST
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Depression can cripple a person's life and I believe it burries our spirit. I have been where you are now a few years ago myself and I am so glad I found the help I needed. If you ever need to talk please message me and I would love to talk to you about this. There is an end to it. And thats not by dying either. You are here for a good reason so don't give up. This too shall pass:)
Hugs~Lo |
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