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POSSESED
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 05:04:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Eyes of evil...windows of the soul....penertrating pupils...black as coal,
secrets hidden...in their mind.....hidden so deep...never to find,
close, feel, their evil breath... tainted, foul....reaking of death,
innocent, oblivious, not wanting to know....sensing the devil they have in tow,
the beast inside them wanting your soul... trying to help him achieve his goal,
whispering obscenities, into your ear... living of pain, revelling in fear,
the beast inside them wanting your soul... trying to help him achieve his goal,
casting shadows on the wall... stumble, running, try not to fall,
closed mind, cant let them in...if you believe the devil will win,
call upon Angels, hope, pray...they take your fear, and horror away,
dont want to hear, dont want to face...the darkness that lurks in the human race..
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lillyjane
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Re: POSSESED
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 05:22:51 AM AEST
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Wow, this was a very powerful write. It followed really well. I liked it. Take care and be good.
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Re: POSSESED
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by lillyjane on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 06:38:51 AM AEST
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| Thank you sadaddy, I wrote this after watching the drama about the moors murders, it is hard to concieve the crimes and murders on children, I wish I never watched it now, and dont think a film about them should of been made.. Theres people like them still out there its frightening. |
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Re: POSSESED
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by maestar on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 09:54:36 AM AEST
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| very powerful write, it gave me the creeps. well done. |
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Re: POSSESED
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by Manda2 on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 05:26:30 PM AEST
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| Fantastic write! Thankfully evil people are rare and when they try to walk amongst the good folk they stand out as the scum they are! Thanks Lillyjane for a fascinating write. |
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