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Nature's Wonder
Contributed by
Pink-Cherry
on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 11:00:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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They watched in amazement
And stood along the shore
Where there should have been an ocean
There was no more
Just then on the horizon
The water did appear
And as it crashed towards them
The town was struck with fear
Soon the wave was upon them
It swept across the town
And although they did run quickly
Thousands were to drown
Shoved into the people
Were buildings, cars, and boats
And none but the most fortunate
Kept the water at their throats
So easily were thousands killed
For a force so strong cannot fail
And even above the human race
Nature’s wonder – the tsunami – did prevail
Copyright ©
Pink-Cherry
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2006-05-15 23:00:50]
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Re: Nature's Wonder
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by Lo2681 on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 11:08:17 PM AEST
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Wow amazing write. Yes that was a tragedy wasn't it. Beautifully put into words. Very deep. GOOD JOB GIRL!:)
~Lo |
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Re: Nature's Wonder
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by emystar on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 11:47:10 PM AEST
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Call it what cha will but there's no doubt that u r a very talented writer.
Very good work.
huggs,
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Re: Nature's Wonder
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by katt on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 12:00:35 AM AEST
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Very good. Good imagery. i think I need to experiment with more forms of poetry too.
That's one thing we can learn from each other here at YPDC. Thanks for the encouragement and inspiration.
katt
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Re: Nature's Wonder
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:52:04 AM AEST
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| Good write. Mother Earth and her awesome power, unbelievable. Peace, Laura |
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Re: Nature's Wonder
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 03:55:28 PM AEST
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Beautifully written, with wonderful imagery. Your rhyming doesn't sound forced, which is a hard feat to accomplish -- but you have done so, and flawlessy too, I might add.
I hope to read more of your poetry,
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Re: Nature's Wonder
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:32:06 PM AEST
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First work I've read of yours. I'm very impressed. Good and powerful write. Saw ya had another close, gonna go check it out.
wabl
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