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Owl
Contributed by
Pink-Cherry
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Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 10:47:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Great wings above an ocean of forest
Feather cut the air
She is a silhouette on the night sky
Engulfed by the tranquil silence
Her eyes search the forest floor
Set gaze on the lonely moon
While our eyes are always closed
Light breaks across the horizon
With it, an awakening world
She returns to the dying pine
In which she hides and waits
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Pink-Cherry
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Re: Owl
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by katt on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 12:05:41 AM AEST
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There are many wonders and secrets of nature. i think you captured a glimpse of one of those, the owl. I thought it was an interesting read. Good job.
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Re: Owl
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 12:25:18 AM AEST
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Incredible writing.
u capture rare beauty in your words.
huggs,
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Re: Owl
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 03:27:22 AM AEST
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What does a silhouette in the night sky look like? A little more precision would not be amiss. But not bad, do keep it up.
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Re: Owl
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 03:57:15 PM AEST
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Isn't silhouette a fun word?
Lovely poem, you managed to capture the grace and beauty of an owl within your words, =).
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Re: Owl
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:44:48 PM AEST
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My first impression of your work just doubled in respect and admiration. Good work! I particularly am moved by this poem for in seventeen wonderful years in the wilderness I've had dozens of totem blessings from visits and one in particular walk with the winged wise one.
On to that third post I saw!
wabl
KenMoore
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