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You're My Weakness

Contributed by xDiSaStErPiEcEx on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 05:58:25 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

her tears run black,
as she starts to cry.
her thoughts so dark,
her wants to die.
it takes control,
she finally gives.
letting go of this world,
in which she lives.
she has one last thought,
here it is...

you got me in trouble,
you caused me pain.
but i love you so much,
i just cant explain.
i cant leave you,
and i never will.
there are so many words,
i cant seem to spill.
i try to tell you,
but it comes out wrong.
thats why im leaving,
i just dont belong.
im really sorry,
but this is how i feel.
im not kidding,
this time im for real.

i hide these scars,
along with these tears.
im not strong enough,
to face my fears.
but i give it a shot,
i go ahead and try.
And with overwhelming pain,
i sit here and cry.
i try to get through this,
really i do.
the only reason im still here,
my only hope left is you.
so i try and pull through,
i try to be strong.
but im sorry, im leaving.
i just dont belong.

her tears run black,
as she starts to cry.
her thoughts so dark,
her wants to die.
it takes control,
she finally gives.
letting go of this world,
in which she lives.
she has one last thought,
here it is...

the words i love you,
are so strong.
but when i say them,
they dont sound wrong.
i really mean it,
i love you with all my heart.
but its my fault,
i took a chance, and fell apart.
i see you all the time,
like when i close my eyes.
thats why i cannot sleep,
cause then i realize.
how much i really love you,
how much i truley care.
but you cant love two people,
thats just not fair.
so i understand, im too late.
you've decided on her.
through these crying eyes,
my visions just a blur.
so i just wanted to tell you,
i know it might seem wrong.
but i love you more than anything,
but i just dont belong.

her tears run black,
as she starts to cry.
her thoughts so dark,
her wants to die.
it takes control,
she finally gives.
letting go of this world,
in which she lives.
she has one last thought,
here it is...

You.

The End.

Copyright © xDiSaStErPiEcEx ... [ 2006-05-15 17:58:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You're My Weakness (User Rating: 1 )
by my_forbidden_heart on Monday, 17th March 2008 @ 09:30:23 PM AEST
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WOW! Almost cried... Really... A very emotional poem... I can relate to this one... But me being the man at the middle...

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